Any help to strengthen this headline?
			 
			 
			
		
		
		
		Pros, any help to strengthen this headline for a Facebook AD (running only at the Feed for smartphones)? 
 
Isn't adding "ATTENTION LADIES:" and "...For You" will made it to long? 
 
Thanks. 
 
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				Last edited by MikePT : February 14, 2022 at 11:47 AM.
				
				
			
		
		
	
		
		
	
	
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