BRIBE Offered For Feedback on Ebay Auction Sales Letter

Glenn,

Thanks for asking.

#1: The doll creeps me out. I would avoid your auction just because of that.

#2: The text formating is different. In yours the testimonials - and the questions to which she answered yes - are clearly segmented with double lines. In hers, there is no segmentation.

You have Bold items where she has none.

The beginning of yours - short brunette people - is different to hers - invisible book. Same with the Invented By Teacher vs Invisible way to shut people up.

#3: Her page layout is worse on the eye than yours - even though they are similar. Ebay is Easy Going on html. Just a small 600 wide table (centered on the page) into which your text is placed will help the reader. Nothing fancy. A html table is pretty easy even for a html-phobe - so no excuses here.

#4: Duane already touched on the About Me and Buy Now. But to add to the feedback... not only does she have No Feedback, her account is New.

#5: It's not unwanted xmas dinner brussle sprouts
http://cgi.ebay.com/A-PAIR-OF-UNWANT...1%7C240%3A1318

Michael Ross

[Glenn]

Dear Michael,

Thanks.

Good stuff.

What is an html table? I memorized the basic html codes. But must have missed out on the html table to control the page width.

Glenn

[Glenn]

Dear Michael,

Thanks for that.

But I wasn't intentionally trying to creep you out with the Weird Doll pic.

You, however.

The Wet, slimy Brussel Sprouts auction photos of YOURS.

Those were creepy.

Thanks,
Glenn

P.S. - Did you get the list of 100 million dollar movie BRIBE Report - ok?

I emailed you some basic table code - I see Cornell has since added some so others can see as well.

Yep. Got the Scooby Do List thing.

I also hate clowns... with their white makeup and fake noses...



And... clowns just aren't right...



Or...



And it's just the tip of the iceberg. These are just a tame sample of how scary clowns can be. There's worse out there. Much worse. {shudder}

Michael Ross

[Glenn]

Dear Michael,

Thanks for your insight into the Ugly - Creep Doll.

She Just sold another book.

Here's a link to the Auction now. Since the other one went bye-bye and got bought...

This is great.

We're Making mistakes like crazy - but selling books anyway.

Glenn

http://cgi.ebay.com/Noise-Thermomete...1%7C240%3A1318