The Easiest, Fastest Way To Membership Profits

Hi Skip:

Going to throw in my 2 cents worth...

The graphic at the top needs to be redone or at least cleaned up some.

All of the content from the headline down to the Step boxes is centered...I would rather see it left aligned except for the "How to Make $500.00" and "It is just two easy steps" which should be centered.

I don't know what you are using to create the page... but for the "No setting up membership scripts, No content writing, Any niche you choose, and No hassles just monthly CASH!" .....I would use the <blockquote> html tag along with bullet points or check marks for each of the 4 points.

Trust you will advise us here on the board when the product is ready for purchasing.

Cornell

[MMacGillivray]

Hi, Skip - I'm going to agree with Cornell about the paragraphs aligning left - it makes it much easier to read; I can cope with centred text when reading a menu, but that's about all :O

I'm also with Cornell when it comes to the image - I created one you can use (but only if you like it!) - it's attached to this post.

Otherwise, the sales letter is a very good read

Margaret

Hi Margaret,

Thank you for your input.

Yes I like the image and I'm using it. Thank you very much. That was very kind of you.

Glad you like the read. I wrote it just for you. Just kidding but that is the way I write. I write like I'm talking to one person. Some times it works and other don't. I guess it depends on the person you are thinking of.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell

Originally Posted by MMacGillivray

Hi, Skip - I'm going to agree with Cornell about the paragraphs aligning left - it makes it much easier to read; I can cope with centred text when reading a menu, but that's about all :O

I'm also with Cornell when it comes to the image - I created one you can use (but only if you like it!) - it's attached to this post.

Otherwise, the sales letter is a very good read

Margaret

Hi Cornell,

Thank you for your comments. Very good suggestions. I have used them all.

As soon as I finish the report I will let everyone know and do a great special.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell

Originally Posted by Cornell

Hi Skip:

Going to throw in my 2 cents worth...

The graphic at the top needs to be redone or at least cleaned up some.

All of the content from the headline down to the Step boxes is centered...I would rather see it left aligned except for the "How to Make $500.00" and "It is just two easy steps" which should be centered.

I don't know what you are using to create the page... but for the "No setting up membership scripts, No content writing, Any niche you choose, and No hassles just monthly CASH!" .....I would use the <blockquote> html tag along with bullet points or check marks for each of the 4 points.

Trust you will advise us here on the board when the product is ready for purchasing.

Cornell