Any help to strengthen this headline?

[Dien Rice]

Originally Posted by MikePT

Pros, any help to strengthen this headline for a Facebook AD (running only at the Feed for smartphones)?

Isn't adding "ATTENTION LADIES:" and "...For You" will made it to long?

Thanks.

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Hi Mike,

I know some people consider the photo / video to be more like the headline in Facebook ads... I think the reason why is because all the text throughout a Facebook ad is the same size, and there's no way to change that...

So, I know what some do is to test different photos in their Facebook ads, the way that people in print advertising would test different headlines...

It's worth testing!

Best wishes,

Dien